Simon Stirling:
Simon hasn't used much media terminology, from what I can see. He has however, described his analysis in some detail. He explains what it's about and expresses his own opinions. In addition, he needs to go over his analysis and check his grammar and spelling. For further improvement, he needs to use a lot more media terms, to make his analysis look more professional and presentable. He have used adjectives and different words, but he needs to check his spelling and grammar again to improve his structure of sentences. I think that Simon needs to analyse at least another front cover/contents page/ double-paged spread.
Benjamin Grabarek:
Benjamin hasn't used quite a lot of media terminology. He has missed out on most of the analysis, as the titles are there but the analysis isn't. However, I can see no spelling or grammar mistakes, but just to be on the safe side, I would advise him to go over his blogs again. To improve further, Benjamin needs to use more media terminology, check his spelling and grammar and finally, complete his missing pieces of analysis.
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